*SMASH* As another pice of the bridge falls off, there was not much left but they knew that they had to finish other wise they knew that if they didn't finish crossing or they wouldn't win the the grand prize they have come all this way and they can't just give it up now can they? It's to dangerous says Grace, we can make it called out Sophie as there hands are shaking Grace says first of all you are going to get us killed not only are we on a cliff but the bridge is falling apart! Oh also purple team are catching up Sophie screams HURRY! They sprint Sophie and Grace forget about bridge falling apart. At last they made it they had won the prize and in to the next competition. The End
Commenting Guidelines
In class, we have been working on blog commenting and i have some comments that i will be reacting to
number 1. is very bad it has all slang language, and bad spelling . (worst)
number 2.this is very good it kept on topic apart from i was a bit point less(3 best)
number 3. this is great they kept on topic apart they are a bit of useless (4 best)
number 4. this comment is horrible it had bad spelling (5 worst)
number 5. this one is great i really like how there were no spelling mistakes and punctuation ( best)
number 6. this is not is not very good it has horrible grammar and slang language ( 2 worst )
number 7. to short and not a question (4 worst)
number 8. not very good and a bit repetitive ( 6 best)
china country of focus
1. image of the china flag
2. what continent is china on
Asia, did you know Asia is the biggest continent out of all of them!
3. what is the capital city
Beijing is the capital of china
4.Is china on the northern or southern hemisphere
china is on the Northern and easter hemisphere
5. what is the population
approximately 1,444,216,107
6. what is the currency
the currency is called reniminbi
7. what is the connection between China and Australia
china and Australia are the sixth largest trading partners
8.what is an interesting fact about china
did you know
China produces 45 billion pairs of chopsticks each year.
9. what are 3 boarding countries with Asia
here are the bordering countries of Asia
Afghanistan, Armenia, Azerbaijan, Bahrain, Bangladesh, Bhutan, Brunei, Burma, Cambodia, China, East Timor, Georgia, Hong Kong, India, I
Indonesia, Iran, Iraq, Israel, Japan, Jordan, Kazakhstan, Kuwait, Kyrgyzstan, Laos, Lebanon, Malaysia, Mongolia, Nepal, North Korea, Oman, Pakistan, Papua New Guinea, Philippines and Qatar. but i am going to be focussing on India and papua new guinea is the world’s 54th largest country and the 3rd largest island country and in India Cows are considered sacred its quite weird!
sophie
Hello I am 𝕊𝕠𝕡𝕙𝕚𝕖
i am 11 years old and love sports🏀. 🏈
I live in Adelaide, Australia And love 🏝SURFING🏝
MONKEYS are my FAVOURITE ANIMALS